Can this will do ?

Ah Bah's edited story.

Ah Bah : $1, $2, $3, $4, $5, $5.20, $5.40, $5.60, $5.80, $5.85

Ah Bah : Woah ! I have $5.85 now !

Ah Bah : I am going to keep my precious money safely and properly.

Mother : Yes, you ought to. If not your father might steal your
money anytime to buy his beer.

Ah Bah : Yes mother, I am going to hide it in a safe place which is near
my bed , probably behind the old cupboard.

Ah Bah : But..... I am still quite afraid that father would find out my
hiding place. What am I suppose to do !

( Father staring at Ah Bah from quite a distance. )

( Not long after, father found Ah Bah's money. )

Father : Ah ha ! I found Ah Bah's money although he tried to keep it
away from me.

( Few days passed by.... )

Ah Lam Soh : Today is my lucky day! I won quite a lot of money.
Here you go Ah Bah, take this 50c to buy anything you like.

Ah Bah : Oh, thank you aunty Ah Lam Soh !

Ah Lam Soh : You are welcome my dear.

This is my script for tml Lit's acting.
Heyys, da credit is mine horrs
Haiz...
This will do ?
Can this last for 3mins ?
I guess not... :(